colleenc
Well-known member
well I really like the comp of the birds, with maybe a bit more offset on the top one to get it apart from the mid bird, I think it has really possibility and is fresh and new...the bills are amazing and reason enough to paint them.
I only offered the other as I know you want to learn how to paint, and in a painting no matter what subject, Composition is the master key IMO, if all else is really done well and the comp is poor then nothing can overcome that. (I hope I did not offend you or anyone else by picking on that.) One way to check the comp is to turn the painting upside down or at different angles, so you see only the shapes, if they are pleasing as a shape and fit in an interesting way together and feel balanced at all angles, then the comp is usually strong. Multiple birds are always a greater challenge, and I think what you created with the viewpoint is very well done.
Comp is on my mind as I'm doing 100 of them for seascape and finding the best of the great seascape artists to study, with only rocks water and sky and huge contrasts to work out, the comp makes or breaks the thing, and it is no easy task to figure out
I only offered the other as I know you want to learn how to paint, and in a painting no matter what subject, Composition is the master key IMO, if all else is really done well and the comp is poor then nothing can overcome that. (I hope I did not offend you or anyone else by picking on that.) One way to check the comp is to turn the painting upside down or at different angles, so you see only the shapes, if they are pleasing as a shape and fit in an interesting way together and feel balanced at all angles, then the comp is usually strong. Multiple birds are always a greater challenge, and I think what you created with the viewpoint is very well done.
Comp is on my mind as I'm doing 100 of them for seascape and finding the best of the great seascape artists to study, with only rocks water and sky and huge contrasts to work out, the comp makes or breaks the thing, and it is no easy task to figure out