No Exif in the Redshank, Simon.
I agree that they look underexposed - you
can help that: that's what EC is for, and better exposure can -
will - often improve the the apparent sharpness of an image.
Some questions:
Are these heavy crops?
Although the shutter speeds are high, was the light as flat and grey as it appears to be?
Where was the light relative to the subjects?
Are you certain about the placement of the AF point on each picture?
I'll be honest and say that my initial reaction isn't of a lack of sharpness
per se, but a combination of other issues such as under underexposure, heavy cropping, poor light and - maybe - something about your conversion/post processing.
You're certainly not expecting too much of the 7D/100-400mm set-up though - it's what I use, and I think I do OK.
The attached Lapwing for example (one of the very first images I took with my 7D): it's a hefty crop too, but you can see from the catchlight (I
work at getting catchlights!
) and the definition in the plumage that I'd made sure that the light (such as it was) was in the right place.
More recently, the Whooper swan is hardly a crop at all, but I still worked to position myself properly so that the bird was in good light.
I really think that's the main issue with your shots, Simon.