wondeful to see that you've popped the sketchbook's proverbial cherry, the swans have all the strong lines you need. There is an avocet amongst these drawings that is spot on and very well done, might I suggest that the next time you sketch the avocets, you try to draw just the outline without the pattern, it forces you to look harder at how the bird is formed - the avocet's pattern is deliberately designed to break up the bird's shape. You've managed to see the pattern perfectly, and that is what you've recorded on these pages, I feel that sometimes the bird itself doesn't fit so well to the pattern. Of course, this coudl be what you're trying to achieve - it is after all what nature intended when we look at the avocet. And your landscapes, I admire very much, you put so much freedom into them, I get the impression that sometimes your birds show inhibitions that aren't there in your landscape work. Keep the little book with you, dive in as often as you can!