I posted this on another forum and they complained there were not enough dark darks and lighter lights to "increase resolution" They live in a landlocked area. I think I have it about right here for the bright overcast it portrays, but it coul
Yep. If you're happy with it leave it alone. I think artists who actually progress in their art often do it in jumps, then plateaus, then jumps, etc. Sometimes the jumps in progress may not be as refined as some of the plateau work. But the artist knows, even if no one else does, that they just made a big jump.
The thing that most strikes me in this is the size of the bird in proportion to the space it's in. It's large! And bold. I think that's great. I can't remember for sure but my recollection is that often when you put birds in an environment they tend to be small. I could be completely wrong but that's my recollection.
This strikes me as a nice, large bold portrayal of a bird in a real environment. I'd guess it will be the stepping stone to many more. And coastal light really is bright. I don't see any problem with it at all. Just sit back and enjoy it.