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Birds and poetry (10 Viewers)

"All day it has Rained" Such a moving poem by Alun Lewis, Steve. Wonderful, thanks. "Rain" - definitely worth a second reading, yes indeed, one just cannot imagine what those poor men had to go through.

Merlin, "Two Pewits" - beautiful, thanks.

I hope no-one minds if I keep on the subject of Edward Thomas but this one by Alun Lewis is just so wonderful.

To Edward Thomas
(On visiting the memorial stone above Steep in Hampshire)


On the way up from Sheet I met some children
Filling a pram with brushwood; higher still
Beside Steep church an old man pointed out
A rough white stone upon a flinty spur
Projecting from the high autumnal woods...
I doubt if much has changed since you came here
On your last leave; except the stone; it bears
Your name and trade: 'To Edward Thomas, Poet.'



Climbing the steep path through the copse I knew
My cares weighed heavily as yours, my gift
Much less, my hope
No more than yours.
And like you I felt sensitive and somehow apart,
Lonely and exalted by the friendship of the wind
And the placid afternoon enfolding
The dangerous future and the smile.



I sat and watched the dusky berried ridge
Of yew-trees, deepened by oblique dark shafts,
Throw back the flame of red and gold and russet
That leapt from beech and ash to birch and chestnut
Along the downward arc of the hill's shoulder,
And sunlight with discerning fingers
Softly explore the distant wooded acres,
Touching the farmsteads one by one with lightness
Until it reached the Downs, whose soft green pastures
Went slanting sea- and skywards to the limits
Where sight surrenders and the mind alone
Can find the sheeps' tracks and the grazing.

And for the moment Life appeared
As gentle as the view I gazed upon.



Later, a whole day later, I remembered
This war and yours and your weary
Circle of failure and your striving
To make articulate the groping voices
Of snow and rain and dripping branches
And love that ailing in itself cried out
About the straggling eaves and ringed the candle
With shadows slouching round your buried head;
And in the lonely house there was no ease
For you, or Helen, or those small perplexed
Children of yours who only wished to please.

Divining this, I knew the voice that called you
Was soft and neutral as the sky
Breathing on the grey horizon, stronger
Than night's immediate grasp, the limbs of mercy
Oblivious as the blood; and growing clearer,
More urgent as all else dissolved away,
--Projected books, half-thoughts, the children's birthdays,
And wedding anniversaries as cold
As dates in history--the dream
Emerging from the fact that folds a dream,
The endless rides of stormy-branched dark
Whose fibres are a thread within the hand--

Till suddenly, at Arras, you possessed that hinted land.

Alun Lewis (1915-1944)

Nerine
 
To Edward Thomas
(On visiting the memorial stone above Steep in Hampshire)

...And for the moment Life appeared
As gentle as the view I gazed upon.

Alun Lewis (1915-1944)

Nerine

I had read that before but, oh, not for years. What a wonderful poem.
 
Nerine,
I couold listen to Edward Thomas all day and what an amazing poem from Alun Lewis. Like Steve I have not read it for many years and forgotten how good it is. I mentioned before that I visited Edward Thomas's grave at Agny and 'now' what a wonderful peaceful place it is, it is a relatively small cemetery but was full of birds including three species of woodpecker. I sat there for about an hour reading his poems aloud to myself, Edward and the rest of the captive audience. It was quite a moving experience which is difficult to explain to some people, (most of whom think I'm barmy). Well perhaps a bit??
regards
Merlin
 
It was quite a moving experience which is difficult to explain to some people, (most of whom think I'm barmy). Well perhaps a bit??

Not at all, Merlin. Well if you are then I am too. It must have been a truly moving and wonderful experience for you and everyone there.


Nerine
 
Here's a snippet I enountered some years ago as a chapter heading in an ornithology text book (of all places). The author was given as Alfred Noyes. I imagine it's part of a larger work though I've never tracked it down. Anyway, it's always stuck in my head

I know a wizardry
Can take a speckled eggshell
And shake thrushes out of it
In every hawthorn tree.

Fred Petersen

Just discovered this thread. I love many of the poets mentioned here. (I'm afraid I havnt read every post so apologies if this has been done already) I thought i'd fill in the rest of this poem quoted by Fugl, and one of my favourites of Noyes.

Wizardry (I think thats the title, it could be Wizards)

There's many a proud wizard from Araby to Egypt
Can read the silver writing of the stars as they run;
And many a dark gypsy, with a pheasent in his knap-sack
Has gathered more by moonshine than wiser men have won;
But I know a wizardry
Can take a buried acorn,
And whisper forests out of it, to tower against the sun.

There's many a magician from Bagdad to Benares,
Can read for a penny what your future is to be;
And a flock of crazy prophets that by staring in a crystal
Can fill it with more fancies than there's herring in the sea;
But I know a wizardry
Can take a freckled egg-shell,
And shake a throstle out of it in every hawthorn tree.

There's many a crafty alchemist from Mecca to Jerusalem,
And Michael Scott and Merlin were reckoned very wise;
But I know a wizardry can take a wisp of sun-fire
And round it to a planet, and roll it through the skies,
With cities, and sea-ports,
And little shining windows,
And hedge-rows, and gardens, and loving human eyes.
 
"There's many a crafty alchemist from Mecca to Jerusalem,"

Loved the line. Welcome to the poetry thread!! Do post some more - you'll enjoy your time here!!
 
... (most of whom think I'm barmy). Well perhaps a bit??
regards
Merlin

Yup - barmy! (-; Well, just a little bit... like we all are here, eh? But I expect you enjoyed every minute of that experience Merlin. You make it sound so very wonderful and, I suspect, highly emotional, too. Where would we be without poetry? It brings so very much, and at times, the comfort can be so very welcome.

No birds in this one, and little comfort, I suppose, yet it brings me a wry smile as I can relate to it just a little!


As Bad as a Mile

Watching the shied core
Striking the basket, skidding across the floor,
Shows less and less of luck, and more and more
Of failure spreading back up the arm
Earlier and earlier, the unraised hand calm,
The apple unbitten in the palm.

Philip Larkin
 
Andrew & Steve-great poems from Edmund Blunden.

Nerine-good to have you back!-"Snow" and the Alun Lewis tribute to Edward Thomas are terrific poems.What a towering poet he would have become.

Merlin- "Two Pewits" is so typically observant of the essence of Lapwing!

Lithune-welcome-hope you enjoy it here.

Steve- "Rain" is one of my favourite poems. I find some anti war tracts unattractive & mawkish, but Edward Thomas seems to avoid that & gets to the awful heart of it:-

Helpless among the living and the dead,
Like a cold water among broken reeds,
Myriads of broken reeds all still and stiff,



This is Emily Dickinson in similar vein :-

Success is counted sweetest
By those who ne'er succeed.
To comprehend a nectar
Requires sorest need.

Not one of all the purple host
Who took the flag to-day
Can tell the definition,
So clear, of victory!

As he, defeated, dying,
On whose forbidden ear
The distant strains of triumph
Burst agonized and clear!


This is by another poet who was so damaged by The Great War-and who
absorbed Edward Thomas's poems :-

The hoe scrapes earth as fine in grain as sand,
I like the swirl of it and swing in the hand
Of the lithe hoe so clever at craft and grace,
And the friendliness, the cleer freedom of the place.

And the green hairs of the wheat on sandy brown.
The draw of eyes toward the coloured town,
The lark ascending slow to a roof of cloud
That cries for the voice of poetry to cry aloud.

Ivor Gurney
______________________
Colin
 
Nerine,
Thanks for that, it's good to know that it's not just me.

Lithune,
A warm welcome, great poem and it's good to have you here.

Steve,
Another gem from Larkin.

Colin,
Emily Dickinson is always special, Ivor Gurney is one of my favourite poets and I consider one of the best war poets ( what sad tribute), I can relate to him and Isaac Rosenberg because they are both come from where I grew up. Gurney especially writes about places that are magic now, so what were they like almost a hundred years ago. Gurney was also an accomplished composer and I understand that some of his music is now available on CD. Not bad for a working class lad from Gloucester.

best regards
Merlin
 
Not exactly poetry perhaps but a least it has a good sprinkling of birds which is a novelty :) To apreciate why just reading these lyrics sends shivers down my spine, you would need to travel back with me to 1970, or to have been there ;)

Grantchester Meadows

"Icy wind of night be gone this is not your domain"

In the sky a bird was heard to cry
Misty morning whisperings and gentle stirring sounds
Belie the deathly silence that lay all around

Hear the lark and harken to the barking of the dark fox
Gone to ground
See the splashing of the kingfisher flashing to the water
And a river of green is sliding unseen beneath the trees
Laughing as it passes through the endless summer
Making for the sea

In the lazy water meadow I lay me down
All around me golden sun flakes settle on the ground
Basking in the sunshine of a bygone afternoon
Bringing sounds of yesterday into this city room

Hear the lark harken to the barking of the dark fox
Gone to ground
See the splashing of the kingfisher flashing to the water
And a river of green is sliding unseen beneath the trees

Roger Waters
 
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Rozinante,
Good one, I am not familiar with this poet.

June is the anniversary of the death in 1993 of Sasha Moorsom, here is an apt poem.

Merlin

The Company of Birds

Ah the company of the birds
I loved and cherished earth
Now, freed of flesh we fly
Together, a flock of beating wings,
I am as light, as feathery,
As gone from gravity we soar
In endless circles
 
Thanks Colin,

I should have known that being a PF fan, still we have had some lyrics which are wonderful poetry, the Moodies come to mind and the many others that appeared on this thread.
regards
Merlin
 
A warm welcome, Lithune. Hope you stick around here.

Nice summery lyrics in Grantchester Meadows, Rozinante.

In a lighter vein here is a happy poem of summer:


In The Poppy Field


Mad Patsy said, he said to me,
That every morning he could see
An angel walking on the sky;
Across the sunny skies of morn
He threw great handfuls far and nigh
Of poppy seed among the corn;
And then, he said, the angels run
To see the poppies in the sun.

A poppy is a devil weed,
I said to him - he disagreed;
He said the devil had no hand
In spreading flowers tall and fair
Through corn and rye and meadow land,
by garth and barrow everywhere:
The devil has not any flower,
But only money in his power.

And then he stretched out in the sun
And rolled upon his back for fun:
He kicked his legs and roared for joy
Because the sun was shining down:
He said he was a little boy
And would not work for any clown:
He ran and laughed behind a bee,
And danced for very ecstasy.

James Stephens

Nerine
 
Not exactly poetry perhaps but a least it has a good sprinkling of birds which is a novelty :) To appreciate why just reading these lyrics sends shivers down my spine, you would need to travel back with me to 1970, or to have been there ;)

Wonderful album - thanks for posting the words. So many songs on that double album will live with me forever. Great days.
 
He ran and laughed behind a bee,
And danced for very ecstasy.

James Stephens

Nerine

Very Blakeian, Nerine, I think.

“When the Sun rises, do you not see a round disk of fire somewhat like a Guinea?” O no, no, I see an Innumerable company of the Heavenly host crying, `Holy, Holy, Holy is the Lord God Almighty.” William Blake
 
Excellent posts from everyone in the past few days. Nice one from Roger Waters, Rozinante, certainly well on-thread!

Before we leave the war poets, I was interested to read recently some poems by Brian Turner, an American soldier-poet who served in Iraq as an infantry team leader. His book is entitled ‘Here, Bullet’, published in 2005. Here are three poems from it, including the title poem. This is raw, blunt realism, expressed with a restrained, lyrical eloquence.

HERE, BULLET

If a body is what you want,
then here is bone and gristle and flesh.
Here is the clavicle-snapped wish,
the aorta's opened valves, the leap
thought makes at the synaptic gap.
Here is the adrenaline rush you crave,
that inexorable flight, that insane puncture
into heat and blood. And I dare you to finish
what you've started. Because here, Bullet,
here is where I complete the word you bring
hissing through the air, here is where I moan
the barrel's cold esophagus, triggering
my tongue's explosives for the rifling I have
inside of me, each twist of the round
spun deeper, because here, Bullet,
here is where the world ends, every time.


ASHBAH

The ghosts of American soldiers
wander the streets of Balad by night,
unsure of their way home, exhausted,
the desert wind blowing trash
down the narrow alleys as a voice
sounds from the minaret, a soulfull call
reminding them how alone they are,
how lost. And the Iraqi dead,
they watch in silence from rooftops
as date palms line the shore in silhouette,
leaning toward Mecca when the dawn wind blows.


EULOGY

It happens on a Monday, at 11:20 A.M.,
as tower guards eat sandwiches
and seagulls drift by on the Tigris River.
Prisoners tilt their heads to the west
though burlap sacks and duct tape blind them.
The sound reverberates down concertina coils
the way piano wire thrums when given slack.
And it happens like this, on a blue day of sun,
when Private Miller pulls the trigger
to take brass and fire into his mouth:
the sound lifts the birds up off the water,
a mongoose pauses under the orange trees,
and nothing can stop it now, no matter what
blur of motion surrounds him, no matter what voices
crackle over the radio in static confusion,
because if only for this moment the earth is stilled,
and Private Miller has found what low hush there is
down in the eucalyptus shade, there by the river.

Brian Turner


Nerine, what a pleasure to read ‘In the Poppy Field’ by James Stephens! It is so reminiscent of his wonderful book ‘The Crock of Gold’. Have you ever read it? If not, do try and get hold of a copy for I think you would enjoy it.


Andrew
 
HERE, BULLET

If a body is what you want,
then here is bone and gristle and flesh...

Andrew

If only those who start the wars had to fight them. What a sickening part of our world that we still haven't learned better, ultimately, than to kill those we don't like.
 
If only those who start the wars had to fight them. What a sickening part of our world that we still haven't learned better, ultimately, than to kill those we don't like.


Absolutely, Steve. And isn't it funny how those who have had no experience of war themselves, or who have deliberately avoided contact with war, are the first to show machismo when it comes to ordering others to enter the killing fields? It is, however, reassuring to know that there are still soldiers out there who are able to express their feelings in verse. It really shows the power and relevance of poetry. As with all the war poets who have been quoted here, Brian Turner's slim volume says infinitely more, and will last infinitely longer, than the acres of newsprint one reads every day in the press.

Whilst we are on this theme, I have to say, as a great admirer of Yeats, that I have never gone along with the view expressed in his poem ‘On Being Asked for a War Poem’:

I think it better that in times like these
A poet's mouth be silent, for in truth
We have no gift to set a statesman right …

This from the poet who wrote the iconic masterpiece ‘Easter 1916’! Even if he didn’t feel ‘close’ or sympathetic to the Great War, that was no reason to reject the poetry of those who were caught up in it (as he did when he edited the Oxford Book of Modern Verse in 1936 and excluded all the war poets). His unconvincing explanation was that ‘passive suffering is not a theme for poetry’. All one can say is that this was not his finest hour.

Having got all that off my chest, it will be birds next post, I promise!!

Andrew
 
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