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Tyke said:
Thank you very much Steve.
That was a kind thought.
Colin

My commiserations to you Colin. It's so sad when one so close slips away, and only the passage of time can get us used to missing one so loved. Take heart in all that he or she loved most in life - all that you love most too - embrace it all.

All best wishes, Sue.

Steve that one was so very true of death, so very sad yet so very beautiful.

Sue.
 
Sue Wright said:
My commiserations to you Colin. It's so sad when one so close slips away, and only the passage of time can get us used to missing one so loved. Take heart in all that he or she loved most in life - all that you love most too - embrace it all.

All best wishes, Sue.

Steve that one was so very true of death, so very sad yet so very beautiful.

Sue.

My commiserations too, Colin; I couldn't possibly express things better than Sue just has...
 
Thank you Sue & Trevor for your thoughts.
They prompt me to mention Stuart Hutchings here. He was a lifelong birder in Cornwall & around the world-those in their sixties may have bumped into him in his heyday.
Cornishman, Shipwright, Conservationist, prolific builder of Hides & Boardwalks, Birder ,Rugby forward,Chairman of CBWPS, Town Councillor, County Councillor, historian, photographer ,lover of a chat , nice man.
Stuart was 63 years old when he died suddenly this week.

With your forbearance -a few amateurish lines in remembrance of him.

POEM FOR STUART

A true son of Cornwall has passed away,
and he leaves a mighty hole
in the lives of those who shared a little
of life with this genial soul.

A true son of Cornwall has left in a haste,
and I cannot believe he has gone-
with his scope and his bins to a sunlit place
where the birds are always in song.

A true son of Cornwall has smiled his last
on the land he cared for so.
And I hear the Heath and the Penryn Clock
whisper-tread safely old friend as you go.

A true son of Cornwall has laid down his tools
and I strain to try and send
to that kindly, gentle, bear of a man
-"I'm proud that you called me friend"



Colin
 
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Tanny said:
Thanks Christine, the one feather was from the Rainbow Bird, the Australian Bee-eater, such a sad sight to find one of those beautiful birds dead.

Thanks for the invite to Talksmall Mike, I had never heard of that Forum and had to put the name into Keyword to find it. I spent an hour skimming through the forum and can see that it is a potentialy interesting place, however with just only 100 members so far and only about 20 to 30 of them participating I am not sure it would reach enough interested parties for a thread on short stories, there again I am contemplating joining because I recognise many regular names from BF among the contributors, I am a member of five other forums and I am not sure I can fit another one in at the moment.


I see what you mean about your love of poetry Tanny.Talk Small is quite new Tanny and a sister, to this sight.Yes we only have 100 members at the moment but like BF we will grow and it's great, that i was able to post a welcome to you tonight.Welcome aboard.

Also on this site, i would joint the X Beebs if i were you, as they would love your work and they too are a great bunch. :loveme:
 
The day is done 1857


The day is done, and the darkness falls from the wings of night,
As a feather is wafted downward from an eagle in his flight.

I see the lights of the village gleam through the rain and mist,
and a feeling comes o’er me that my soul cannot resist:

A feeling of sadness and longing, that is not akin to pain,
and resembles sorrow only as the mist resembles the rain.

Come, read to me some poem, some simple and heartfelt lay,
that shall soothe this restless feeling, and banish thoughts of day.

Not from the grand old masters, not from the bards sublime,
whose distant footsteps echo through the corridors of time

For like strains of martial music, their mighty thoughts suggest
life’s endless toil and endeavour and tonight I long to rest

Read from some humbler poet, whose songs gushed from his heart,
as showers from clouds of summer or tears from eyelids start;

Who, through long days of labour, and nights devoid of ease,
still heard in his soul the music of wonderful melodies.

Such songs have power to quiet the restless pulse of care,
and comes like the benediction that follows after prayer.

Then read from treasured volume, the poem and thy choice,
and lend to the rhyme of the poet, the beauty of thy voice

And the night shall be filled with music and the cares that infest the day
shall fold their tents like Arabs and as silently steal away.







.
 
"...And the night shall be filled with music and the cares that infest the day
shall fold their tents like Arabs and as silently steal away."

Thanks for posting that, Mary. And Colin, you can be proud of your poem to your lost friend. Sad times, eh?
 
Poems

Some great poems here, keep them coming!
Merlin
scampo said:
"...And the night shall be filled with music and the cares that infest the day
shall fold their tents like Arabs and as silently steal away."

Thanks for posting that, Mary. And Colin, you can be proud of your poem to your lost friend. Sad times, eh?
 
Tyke said:
POEM FOR STUART

A true son of Cornwall has passed away,
and he leaves a mighty hole
in the lives of those who shared a little
of life with this genial soul.

A true son of Cornwall has left in a haste,
and I cannot believe he has gone-
with his scope and his bins to a sunlit place
where the birds are always in song.

A true son of Cornwall has smiled his last
on the land he cared for so.
And I hear the Heath and the Penryn Clock
whisper-tread safely old friend as you go.

A true son of Cornwall has laid down his tools
and I strain to try and send
to that kindly, gentle, bear of a man
-"I'm proud that you called me friend"



Colin
I'd be proud to write something so nice.

Mick
 
scampo said:
"...And the night shall be filled with music and the cares that infest the day
shall fold their tents like Arabs and as silently steal away."

Thanks for posting that, Mary. And Colin, you can be proud of your poem to your lost friend. Sad times, eh?

Yes Steve-but happy memories too ,as Sue predicted.

And Mary's poem a comforting one-who was the poet Mary?

Mick-thankyou

Colin
 
Here's one that just occured to me, the opening line has sporned a thousand jokes but the actual poem is very tragic, sorry if it has been posted before but most of the silly jokes are made by people who have never read it.

Casabianca ["The boy stood on the burning deck"]

Felicia Hemans (1793 - 1835)

The boy stood on the burning deck
Whence all but he had fled;
The flame that lit the battle's wreck
Shone round him o'er the dead.

Yet beautiful and bright he stood,
As born to rule the storm;
A creature of heroic blood,
A proud, though child-like form.

The flames rolled onhe would not go
Without his Father's word;
That father, faint in death below,
His voice no longer heard.

He called aloud'say, Father, say
If yet my task is done?'
He knew not that the chieftain lay
Unconscious of his son.

'Speak, father!' once again he cried,
'If I may yet be gone!'
And but the booming shots replied,
And fast the flames rolled on.

Upon his brow he felt their breath,
And in his waving hair,
And looked from that lone post of death
In still yet brave despair.

And shouted but once more aloud,
'My father! must I stay?'
While o'er him fast, through sail and shroud,
The wreathing fires made way.

They wrapt the ship in splendour wild,
They caught the flag on high,
And streamed above the gallant child,
Like banners in the sky.

There came a burst of thunder sound
The boyoh! where was he?
Ask of the winds that far around
With fragments strewed the sea!

With mast, and helm, and pennon fair,
That well had borne their part
But the noblest thing which perished there
Was that young faithful heart.

Mick
 
Hello Colin,

That was so beautiful and personal a tribute to Stuart, I'm sure he would be honoured and proud to have seen it knowing it was written for him alone. Beautiful Colin.

Sue.


Mary Evelyn said:
The day is done 1857

Hi Mary,

That was a wonderful poem, so easy to read yet with such great meaning. Thanks for the pleasure of it.

Sue.
 
Mickeymouse said:
Here's one that just occured to me, the opening line has sporned a thousand jokes but the actual poem is very tragic, sorry if it has been posted before but most of the silly jokes are made by people who have never read it.

Casabianca ["The boy stood on the burning deck"]


I didn't see yours above Mick, though I was possibly doing mine at the time.

Thanks so much for putting that one on as I've never before heard the full poem but am so glad I have now. You're right it is very sad, but with a beauty in the writing too. Many thanks Mick,

Sue.
 
Sue-thank you. I expect Stewart is out looking for that Willet he always thought would turn up in Cornwall.

Mick-I hadn't read the full poem either-it's very powerful. I wondered if it told of a real event?

Colin
 
Mickymouse said:
Here's one that just occured to me, the opening line has sporned a thousand jokes but the actual poem is very tragic, sorry if it has been posted before but most of the silly jokes are made by people who have never read it.

Casabianca ["The boy stood on the burning deck"]

...
I remember reading that one at school, Mick in the early 1960s. I wonder what the poet's intention was? To question just when a lad should stop obeying his father?

I can remember a book called "The Pan Book of Rugby Jokes" which I bought when I was about fourteen. At the time it seemed very rude and I'm sure would not be allowed today being so politically incorrect. It had a few jokes based on this poem.
 
Thank you Mick for that poem, all I knew was the first line, I will keep it in my special place with all my other favourites.
 
Colin your poem to your friend Stuart is a lovely verse,a birding friend who will always be held dearly in your memory,also Micky,many ,many thanks for posting the "Boy stood on the burning deck".I have never read this poem,like many people ,I have only ever heard the "fun versions!!!".But it is a very moving piece of verse.One can just see the young boy standing and waiting as he had always been instructed by his father.
 
Thank you Christine. This thread was instrumental.

Re Casabianca, perhaps everyone knew-I didn't-this was a real boy in a real incident witnessed by British sailors during the Battle of The Nile. It occurred in 1798 on the French flagship L'Orient.

Colin
 
Good to know Colin, though even more poignant now. However, good to know that someone commemorated such a sad event and that we're all seeing it in it's full and proper version now.

Sue
 
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