DanC.Licks
AKA Daniel Bradley
You can see the patterns in the feathers of the right wing, like on these tail feathers: (these are not moiré patterns, they are really there)

It seems the focus grabbed onto the wing feathers which in themselves have lots of contrast edges against the background. So I would say it looks pretty much right on. You had the ISO up high so the shutter speed is actually more than enough. A slower shutter speed would blur the background even more, but always at the risk of getting some motion blur in the wings, which I don't really mind so much if the overall effect is good. Try reducing the highs and high mids to tone down the background (can also be done by darkening and de-saturating the greens and yellows) and bringing up the shadows. I think then you would see more detail in the feathers. Crows are hard to nail. Nothing worse than black birds against a light background. That is one area where I see improvement in the Mark II; there is definitely a little more to play with in the shadows.
And remember, film is cheap these days, so shoot lots!
Edit:
I have taken the liberty to do a rough edit on the shot to illustrate what I mean. Hope you don't mind...


It seems the focus grabbed onto the wing feathers which in themselves have lots of contrast edges against the background. So I would say it looks pretty much right on. You had the ISO up high so the shutter speed is actually more than enough. A slower shutter speed would blur the background even more, but always at the risk of getting some motion blur in the wings, which I don't really mind so much if the overall effect is good. Try reducing the highs and high mids to tone down the background (can also be done by darkening and de-saturating the greens and yellows) and bringing up the shadows. I think then you would see more detail in the feathers. Crows are hard to nail. Nothing worse than black birds against a light background. That is one area where I see improvement in the Mark II; there is definitely a little more to play with in the shadows.
And remember, film is cheap these days, so shoot lots!
Edit:
I have taken the liberty to do a rough edit on the shot to illustrate what I mean. Hope you don't mind...

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