timwootton
Well-known member
Elina, I think you're doing everything right. The drawings are quite clearly from life and several of them are exceedingly good. In the finished painting, perhaps you have made more of the scapular/greater coverts block than required; this, with the main structure of the wing being almost hidden by the breast feathers perhaps creates an unusual visual impression, but I do think you're getting it! Lovely work again.